Mirak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cursed Edition (Trailer)]

Usually i write lenghty reviews.

But this time i believe i can summarize with this.

Nice, man.

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

Ohh man.

I can now see why this is top flash of all time.
It made me laugh to tears. xD

[Turd Eating Cat]

This was extremely awesome

Pixel art flashg movies have always been enchanting to me, and your hard work shows! All of this, in Ms paint? Wow!

I completely LOVED the random dancing duck. It made my day.

[MGS2 - Hanging mode]

For a first flash, it was pretty good.

I'd reccomend the addition of a preloader next time, but overall your aniation is not bad at all. Nice job!

[Whiny the pooh]

Puto el que lo lea

Ah! Lo lei!
DEEEEEEEMONIOS!

Emanhattan responds:

eres puto ahora

todo gracias a MI

[Vete a la Versh 5]

Ahora si, ahora si!

Me habian picado (tus flashes wey) desde que vi Vete a la versh 2, de plano lo unico que faltaba para volverme fan al 100 era que hubiera una cancion chingona en uno de tus flashes y he aqui!

Como me cago de risa con esta shingadera, ta weno, ta weno!

Darkar responds:

Gracias! :)

[TOOTHgether, we are]

Genial. Necesitamos mas artistas asi.

Son animaciones como estas las que quisiera tener tiempo de hacer.
Buen trabajo!

[Tonfa]

Well...

Shaggy lines, poor audio optimization, lack of color, low framerate.

Shaggy Lines: Your art is not bad, but it seriously needs a lot of polishing on your part, since right now it looks like Generic Begginer Manga 1.0. Round, softer lines must be used, also, activate the pressure control option on flash so that you achieve a sleek look on your lines.

Poor audio optimization: Just because it's a test doesn't mean that for the next time you can't avoid using sound so recklessly. The music was too loud and the sounds were either louder or at the same level that the music, and that just creates a mess of soundwaves that's just a pain on the ears. Next time, try lowering the volume according to the sound effect/background music you're going to use, this is vital for a succesful movie.

Lack of color: Self explanatory, really. Next time try drawing everything black and white, and then paint every frame that you made.

Low framerate: This is also self explanatory, increasing the framerate means a lot more work on drawings, but it'll also improve your animation a LOT. 30 frames per second, even 27, is a good quantity.

ThiefCopy responds:

I agree the lines could have been much smoother, and of course a higher framerate, but I didn't really think my sound was reckless, for me the music wasn't overly loud, and I wanted the sound effects to be louder, otherwise they would be to difficult to hear. Still, thanks for the step by step review, very helpful.