Mirak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lion & Giraffe]

This was cute.

You still need some more practice with your drawing hand, but it's a very decent work of art.

Annoying characters are a bit overrated, try exploring scenarios not thought of before, you have what's needed to create something great, you just have to squeeze your creative juice out.

Queen0fHearts responds:

Thank you for the feedback. I actually drew this using my mouse which made it a little more difficult but I think it came out cute. I agree that annoying characters are used often but I don't think they are overated. Like Druox said, it makes you WANT the lion to kick giraffe's butt.

[Whiny the pooh]

Puto el que lo lea

Ah! Lo lei!
DEEEEEEEMONIOS!

Emanhattan responds:

eres puto ahora

todo gracias a MI

[Vete a la Versh 5]

Ahora si, ahora si!

Me habian picado (tus flashes wey) desde que vi Vete a la versh 2, de plano lo unico que faltaba para volverme fan al 100 era que hubiera una cancion chingona en uno de tus flashes y he aqui!

Como me cago de risa con esta shingadera, ta weno, ta weno!

Darkar responds:

Gracias! :)

[Tonfa]

Well...

Shaggy lines, poor audio optimization, lack of color, low framerate.

Shaggy Lines: Your art is not bad, but it seriously needs a lot of polishing on your part, since right now it looks like Generic Begginer Manga 1.0. Round, softer lines must be used, also, activate the pressure control option on flash so that you achieve a sleek look on your lines.

Poor audio optimization: Just because it's a test doesn't mean that for the next time you can't avoid using sound so recklessly. The music was too loud and the sounds were either louder or at the same level that the music, and that just creates a mess of soundwaves that's just a pain on the ears. Next time, try lowering the volume according to the sound effect/background music you're going to use, this is vital for a succesful movie.

Lack of color: Self explanatory, really. Next time try drawing everything black and white, and then paint every frame that you made.

Low framerate: This is also self explanatory, increasing the framerate means a lot more work on drawings, but it'll also improve your animation a LOT. 30 frames per second, even 27, is a good quantity.

ThiefCopy responds:

I agree the lines could have been much smoother, and of course a higher framerate, but I didn't really think my sound was reckless, for me the music wasn't overly loud, and I wanted the sound effects to be louder, otherwise they would be to difficult to hear. Still, thanks for the step by step review, very helpful.

[Vete a la Versh 2]

Jajajajaja no mames! xD

"Todo saldra bien porque-PEEEERRAAAA! :D"
Increible. Primera risa honesta de toda la semana.

Darkar responds:

Woot!

[SkoolCool Demo Reel 2008]

A remix. Yeah right.

Is called "turning the song backwards". Quien la cantaba... Molotov? No ya no me acuerdo.
Y si ya esta bien viejo, todavia trae al peje.

SkoolCool responds:

El punto no era que la cancion estuviese genial, solo importaba la animación. El peje estaba ahi para un proyecto escolar, no por que fuera antiguo ni por algun otra razón.

[Chaos Chemistry LE]

Of course it is!

Woah, you actually did it, thanks!
I don't know why, some guy said my review asking for the loop was abusive and it got deleted.

Heil responds:

i dont know but yes i made it!