Mirak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[just violence]

I don't care either. :)

You don't care what needas fixing, you don't care about cirtiscism, you don't care if this is shit or not, well, i don't care about giving it other score than 0.

Here you go.

TheL1st responds:

thanks! =D

[Muestra P.M.S.6]

Que chingados...?

La neta.

[An Odd Humpty Dumpty]

EVERYONE, WATCH THIS FLASH!

YES. THIS flash here is a PERFECT example of what flash movies we want here as your first ones, not stick men nor 4 frame loops without sound, nor HUGE flash movies with preloaders.

Excellent use of textures, next time, try using a faster frame per second rate, it'll make the animation go more fluid.

Naytronic5000 responds:

Never thought of using a faster frame rate. I was wondering if that would solve a couple issues. THANKS!!!

[Ryu vs Golem]

*sigh*

HOW DO I USED WAND TOOL?!?!?!!?
Seriously, besides being a spritemovie, you didn't even had the decency of removing Ryu's background from the sprite.

Fail.

InnerChild721 responds:

Didn't have the decently?

I CAN'T!!

That's not how it works, the color is the Image, Mr. Sprite expert.

[Vote Harvey Dent]

Review.

Havey Dent looks like that actor from the movie "No reservations".
Also, i don't care much about supporting the guy since i don't live in that country, but as far as the animation goes you did an average job. More frames per second rate and bounce effects to give it a more fluid animation will make it look presentable to the public.

[Blackvsblue]

My review

There are many sound libraries in the web. For example, findsounds is a great website wich has a search function to say, find "punch" sounds etc. Next time try adding sounds.

You must go to the flash protal and click on "get NG preloaders", then open the preloader and follow the instructions inside.
Now, as for your flash, the concept is too overused, there is this something on 13 year old kids that makes them think violence is cool and stuff. And that's ok, you can do whatever you feel like doing in flash, but try to make something with a story instead of mindless, pointless stick fights and related material.
You made a well use of the Flash 8 filters and, though the graphics were awfully simple, you managed to keep me interested enhough to view it 'till the end.

By the way, to stop a movie at the end to prevent it from replaying over and over, try clicking on the last keyframe of your flash. Once you clicked on it, press F9 and the actionscript panel shall open, put this into it:

stop();

This will make the movie stop at the end and it won't keep playing.

Uberwsonicman responds:

thx

[Lightning Line]

Awesome.

This is very dazzling, seizure approved!

[Life of Baggy]

Well this look like it might have pote-WHAT THE???

It looked fine when it started and it developed nice, but it all wen't down with that ending. It's a plastic paper bag, it does not have blood. If it had blood then it wouldn't be able to float.

LOGIC ERROR.

SynestheticSoul responds:

This is to everyone who's all like, "Why does it bleed?!?!"

Because I thought it would be random and funny. I see a lot of stuff that doesn't make sense. Cartoons on TV, anyone?

[Anti-Strawberryclock]

Oh, it's you.

So the cock flash that got blammed the other day was yours, that did not help much for expectations of this flash movie lol.
This does show you know what you're doing, very simple cartoonish style, wich is a good thing, use of preloader, optimized audio, yep, and finally a good dose of anti clock violence. All the good things a flash need to succeed.

muffinman9 responds:

My clock flash didnt get blammed, it passed, I havent got a movie blammed yet...aw well thanks so much for the 10 and for all the postive words. I really appreciate your review, thank you.

[Irrelevance]

Wow, This is something worth watching.

My favorite part of this flash is the scenes with the capella music. It was your voice put in three layers and tones, right? i'd wish i was able of doing that. :P
A very nice job, it did deserve the 2nd place.

Off topic: I love how people like jbrown5us likes to criticise flash works for having 'dry art' and shit when they have no flash submissions. People should critic just when they're able to demonstrate that they can pull up something better, if not, then their oppinion is worht shit.