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Awesome.

It deserves a prize. An excellent animation of a caliber i have seen very few times here.
I giggled when the dude says 'just here watching this sweet movie" because it's true.
A bit dissapointed of the crappy ending but the movie itself is well worth a watch.

Mi voto.

Voy a votar de manera justa.
No me gusta el reggaeton, de veras, no es que tenga nada en contra de los que lo cantan, de hecho el ritmo de las canciones esta bailable, pero simplemente la letra se ha vuelto demasiado degradante e irrespetuosa para nuestras fieles compañeras las mujeres.
Todas las canciones siempre tienen algo relacionado con el sexo, eso ya aburre despues de 5900000034320 canciones con el mismo tema.

Otra: NO son canciones. Una cancion contiene elementos liricos detallados y no derogatorios que arman un ambiente armónico ante el sistema auditivo del oyente, este no es el caso.
Cualquier inculto tenochca puede hacer su "cancion" de reggaeton simplemente trayendo el soundtrack cortado de alguna cancion famosa como 'Follow the leader' u otras y gritas cosas relacionadas con el sexo al micrófono, no importa si tienes bonita voz o si sabes canta, solo hay que gritar incluyendo dos o tres tonos. (Cualquier cnciond e reggaeton lo demuestra)

Ahora, con respecto a las gráficas, Solo dibujaste un... Eh... Algo y lo moviste muchas veces, la mayoria de veces incluyendo imagenes de fondo o escenografias hecha presionando y jalando el mouse para todos lados con diferentes colores.

Si necesita mucha mejora.

Starberry responds:

reggaeton, eh, pues, no me gusta tambien. yo pienso que es comico.

jaja, esta flash nunca estaba pretendido estar serio.

mi espanol no esta tan bueno que estaba, que triste! yo puedo leer bien, pero se olvido alguno vocabulario y gramatica! :o

A well made first flash, BUT...

Based in your newbiness status:

Backgrounds = Good.
Music & sfx = Regular.
Character's graphics = Terrible.

Use of preloader = Excellent.

Now, for the pros, a nice first flash movies with something more than some sticks killing each other of some penises introducing themselves to some orifice. A background music that goes with the theme and mood, etc.

For the cons: If it IS a depiction of an important moment of your life, you didn't quite express it at all by using stick figures, you could have as well drawn some basic characters if you were able of drawing a background of decent quality.

Overall, it shall not be balmmed, good nice entry, please refine more your flash skills and make a remake of thes movie in the future when you feel you have more experience in the field of flash.

...

English please.

I liked it.

/r/ song at the end plz.

That is not a proper size for a flash site

So far animation and graphics were very good, but i found some flaws that needs to be corrected.
-For a flash site, use a canvas size of 800 x 600 pixels.
-Remove the frog or make it do something else, that NAHNAH sound is annoying.
-Use a higher fps rate (frame per seconds), for flash websites i use from 30 to 50.

That is all, i liked how the preloader worked. :)

lolrzna

"It's A KITTY! KITTY KITTY KITTY!
LOOK AT MY STICK!"

These were awesome!

Very good.

"THE DEMONS, MAN, THE DEMONS!"
Best freakin' part.

Wtf, why is a pegasus in an unicorn flash?

PROTIP: Pegasus =/= Unicorns.

lol

Hehe... It made me laugh, but i jumped since i had my speakers turned to 100.
So, how did you do the voice?

Flash is delicious. You must agree! Have you tried such a thing? Have you? Is quite good, GOOD!

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