Score: 9

"For a first flash, it was pretty good."

submission: MGS2 - Hanging mode

date: December 18, 2009

I'd reccomend the addition of a preloader next time, but overall your aniation is not bad at all. Nice job!

Score: 10

"Puto el que lo lea"

submission: Whiny the pooh

date: December 11, 2009

Ah! Lo lei!
DEEEEEEEMONIOS!

Score: 8

"Wasted talent."

submission: Jombilation

date: May 14, 2009

Too bad animating skills like this are wasted on stick fights.

Score: 10

"Ahora si, ahora si!"

submission: Vete a la Versh 5

date: May 11, 2009

Me habian picado (tus flashes wey) desde que vi Vete a la versh 2, de plano lo unico que faltaba para volverme fan al 100 era que hubiera una cancion chingona en uno de tus flashes y he aqui!

Como me cago de risa con esta shingadera, ta weno, ta weno!

Score: 10

"Genial. Necesitamos mas artistas asi."

submission: TOOTHgether, we are

date: May 11, 2009

Son animaciones como estas las que quisiera tener tiempo de hacer.
Buen trabajo!

Score: 6

"Well..."

submission: Tonfa

date: April 29, 2009

Shaggy lines, poor audio optimization, lack of color, low framerate.

Shaggy Lines: Your art is not bad, but it seriously needs a lot of polishing on your part, since right now it looks like Generic Begginer Manga 1.0. Round, softer lines must be used, also, activate the pressure control option on flash so that you achieve a sleek look on your lines.

Poor audio optimization: Just because it's a test doesn't mean that for the next time you can't avoid using sound so recklessly. The music was too loud and the sounds were either louder or at the same level that the music, and that just creates a mess of soundwaves that's just a pain on the ears. Next time, try lowering the volume according to the sound effect/background music you're going to use, this is vital for a succesful movie.

Lack of color: Self explanatory, really. Next time try drawing everything black and white, and then paint every frame that you made.

Low framerate: This is also self explanatory, increasing the framerate means a lot more work on drawings, but it'll also improve your animation a LOT. 30 frames per second, even 27, is a good quantity.

Score: 6

"Great idea, awesome concept, done very bad."

submission: Musical Mingle

date: April 27, 2009

The idea and composition was pretty good, i'd say it had potential for a daily feature, but what seemed to be a great ideas was at the end executed terribly.

The animation is very bad, the graphics could have been done in a very different and much more better way, the background could have been consisted of something more than just a couple of tiled and repeated lines.

Overall, try doing it again, next time, try making the music longer and remove the nuclear explosion and the singing mouths, those just put an unneeded tack in your foot.

Score: 6

"Senseless violence, sticks and random music."

submission: Battlefield My Style!

date: March 20, 2009

That's all this flash is. I would have given you a better score depending on the originality and storytelling factor, which you olympically jumped across of.

Graphics: 6/10.- 5 of these 6 points goes to the smoke and fire effects you drew, the last point to the actual design of the characters.

Audio: 2/10.- A random music track with no optimization at all.

Interactivity: 1/10.- Where is the preloader? You need to put a preloader in your movies, is fundamental for it to be enjoyed quite a lot more on this site.

Theme: 0/10.- Gerenic, done to death and awfully planned. Keep in mind that the thing that keeps scores being high is not making the same thing over and over, regardless of who made it, scores are high when people are original enhough to create a story, senseless violence does not look good on anyone's profile.

Overall: 6/10.- You're still way too green, keep training, you've got potential.

Score: 10

"A great piece."

submission: Jackie

date: March 17, 2009

To think this scene could have actually happened in any similar or identical way in our daily life. A great job.

Score: 9

"Excellent first animation."

submission: Ketchup & Mustard

date: March 4, 2009

This is what we need here at newgrounds.
Honest, finished first flashes with a plot (sort of) and enhough balance between comical humor and good graphics.

One thing i'd reccomend is upgrading the audio, since it was pretty low quality and some parts of their dialogue were hard to understand.

Overall, nice work and i hope to see more Ketchup and Mustard in the future.